Pirate skulls and bones

Friday, January 22, 2010 @ 11:56 PM

Sec 2 composition

The night was cold and damp as i waited to catch a bus home. It was just before midnight. I waited and waited but no bus came. As i was on the point of making up my mind to walk home, a car appeared in the dark.

"Beep, Beep!" The car just honked. It stopped in front of me, windows of the car slid down. There was a black figure. "Boy, do you need to go home? I saw the bus involved in an accident just a few kilometers down the road." The man said eerily. I thought for a few seconds. Should I go home taking the car? My favourite show would be starting and i could not possibly just miss it.

Finally, I replied, " Yes please, i hope it wouldn't take too much of your time, sir."

"Get into the car," The guy answered.

I got in the car as fast as possible as I did not want to miss the show. Vrooom, Vrooom... The car sped and reached a small old mansion in just a few seconds.

The car stopped with a screech. The guy got out of the car and he pulled me out.

"Help! Help! Someone, help me!" I cried. I guessed that there was something fishy. He brought me into a small room with only television set. He tied me with the rope on a chair facing the TV Set.

He played a tape. The tape showed a guy being crushed in a bus accident. That guy who died in the car accident somehow resembled that guy who sent me here. Just then, something flashed into my thought-"GHOSTS"! It was the Lunar seventh month and i felt the room getting colder and colder.

That guy suddenly flashed a smiled at the door. "Do you know why i Brought you here?" He asked.

"No... No...," I muttered.

"I mean no harm. I just want you to help me tell your father something. Tell him I'm grateful towards him for donating some money for me," That guy said.

"What's your name? And can I ask if you're dead?" That guy just disappeared into thin air. I was so frightened that I shut my eyes. When I opened them, I found myself back at my house. I went in and slept because i was really tired. I slept and got into my dreams. That guy flashed into my mind. "Remember to do what I've just told you!" he spoke to me.

"Cockadoodledoo!" The chicken Crowed and I got up immediately. I told my father the whole incident. After listening to me, he brought me to burn some incense paper for him.

I had never believed in ghost of aliens. But what i experienced that night has created some doubt in my mind.

This was an English composition i wrote in Sec 2. I got 17/30 for it. Well, the teacher even remarked saying it was 'quite good'.

I can't believe that i used "Beep Beep!", "Vrooom", "Cockadoodledoo" in Compos. I bet this is the reason why i passed overall, cause i used DRAMATIC vocab. thank you.

& i believe that this is one of my best compositions written in Sec 2. I still remember that my compo was so funnily written that everyone laughed when i share it in Choir. Stuart knows!

If you think that this compo is written badly, you should read the others!

But too bad i can only find this compo written during my lower sec days. I bet the rest are much more hilarious!

(Just thought that i'd share with you since i found it awhile ago.)

Saturday, January 23, 2010 @ 11:05 PM My Project 365.
Friday, January 22, 2010 @ 11:56 PM Sec 2 composition The night was cold and damp as i waited to catch a bus home. It was just before midnight. I waited and waited but no bus came. As i was on the point of making up my mind to walk home, a car appeared in the dark. "Beep, Beep!" The car just honked. It stopped in front of me, windows of the car slid down. There was a black figure. "Boy, do you need to go home? I saw the bus involved in an accident just a few kilometers down the road." The man said eerily. I thought for a few seconds. Should I go home taking the car? My favourite show would be starting and i could not possibly just miss it. Finally, I replied, " Yes please, i hope it wouldn't take too much of your time, sir." "Get into the car," The guy answered. I got in the car as fast as possible as I did not want to miss the show. Vrooom, Vrooom... The car sped and reached a small old mansion in just a few seconds. The car stopped with a screech. The guy got out of the car and he pulled me out. "Help! Help! Someone, help me!" I cried. I guessed that there was something fishy. He brought me into a small room with only television set. He tied me with the rope on a chair facing the TV Set. He played a tape. The tape showed a guy being crushed in a bus accident. That guy who died in the car accident somehow resembled that guy who sent me here. Just then, something flashed into my thought-"GHOSTS"! It was the Lunar seventh month and i felt the room getting colder and colder. That guy suddenly flashed a smiled at the door. "Do you know why i Brought you here?" He asked. "No... No...," I muttered. "I mean no harm. I just want you to help me tell your father something. Tell him I'm grateful towards him for donating some money for me," That guy said. "What's your name? And can I ask if you're dead?" That guy just disappeared into thin air. I was so frightened that I shut my eyes. When I opened them, I found myself back at my house. I went in and slept because i was really tired. I slept and got into my dreams. That guy flashed into my mind. "Remember to do what I've just told you!" he spoke to me. "Cockadoodledoo!" The chicken Crowed and I got up immediately. I told my father the whole incident. After listening to me, he brought me to burn some incense paper for him. I had never believed in ghost of aliens. But what i experienced that night has created some doubt in my mind. This was an English composition i wrote in Sec 2. I got 17/30 for it. Well, the teacher even remarked saying it was 'quite good'. I can't believe that i used "Beep Beep!", "Vrooom", "Cockadoodledoo" in Compos. I bet this is the reason why i passed overall, cause i used DRAMATIC vocab. thank you. & i believe that this is one of my best compositions written in Sec 2. I still remember that my compo was so funnily written that everyone laughed when i share it in Choir. Stuart knows! If you think that this compo is written badly, you should read the others! But too bad i can only find this compo written during my lower sec days. I bet the rest are much more hilarious! (Just thought that i'd share with you since i found it awhile ago.)
Friday, January 8, 2010 @ 11:09 PM what up! hi, i rock. OFFICIALLY